Thursday 24th April

Today in class we spoke about our choreographic principles blog and how we could improve and what we could improve on. We work in our groups that we are working in for the show in June. We looked at each other's blogs and gave individual feed back to one another.

We then had to indemnify strengths and weaknesses for our own blogs
         STRENGTHS 

• All up to date
• Know what I'm talking about
• Cover the main points.

        WEAKNESS

• Don't bullet point as much
• Try not to repeat myself to much
• More research to be done

What do we individually think what we could improve on?

• Explain more what is happening when I upload a photo 
• Use more technical language 

Pick one strong blog and explain why it is "good" in your option?

My group pick my blog and gave me the reasons why my blog is the strongest in our group and why they think it was good. The feedback I had was that my blog is always up to date. I always answer the questions that are set in class and explain using some technical language and it responds to the stimuli and that its interesting to look at.

How does it link to the criteria? 

By using technical language and explaining what is being done in class time.

List of areas to discuss in blogs?

• Write an action plan of what the group is going to do next
• work within a team and give eachother feedback all the time